[/spoiler]Harakash Maha Vishnu wrote:Phersi , Lord Vishnu’s scribe had just come out of his quarters when he was thrown backwards. The attack alarm was sounding. As he stood up another blast hit the hatak. He quickly went to the Peltak. He had to move abrubtly as about 10 jaffa came running past.
Another violent blast hit the ship. He made it to the peltak, smoke was filling the room. A jaffa was shouting orders.
“Jaffa, what is happening”
“An Asgard ship dropped out of hyperspace and started to attack. We have raised shields but we are no match for there warship".
The Jaffa was right. Lord Vishnu’s command ship was a different design to this old version.
“We must enter hyperspace, the shields will not take much more of this as"............ as a blast rips through the peltak.
Phersi was once again, dumped onto the floor. When he awoke, he found himself in the medical quarters. He had no symbiote to help with the healing, as Lord Vishnu had not wanted a symbiote placed within him, to ensure his writings where his own.
In normal terms, if he was human, then the jaffa would not of helped him but as Lord Vishnus highest ranking human, he was well cared for.
“Jaffa, what happened”
“We left the battle”
Phersi was impressed. The Jaffa would of no doubt have fought to the bitter end, no matter how in vain, but he thanked he was a precious cargo and looking at some of the Jaffa they looked at him with disdain, for they had to run away from battle, but what did he care. As long as his god Lord Vishnu blessed him with his omnipotence he was safe.
Nice take down of my MS Griz, I am sure I will return the favour and I may even max it out for you which I have not done in many many months to see what the old girl can do.
a very enjoyable read