I got some of my work published :D

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I got some of my work published :D

My WW1 based poem, done in my english class is titled "Morning Hate" which is the 2minutes of fire at around 9am I think between the Tommy's and the Huns.

It is being published for the young writers competition I entered it in, The book it will be in is called: Past Poets - Future Voices UK inspirations. it is scheduled for publication on 31st July 2010.

I am extremely proud of this tbh. its my 10th piece of published work, my 3rd published poem.

The website is here

It is called "Morning Hate" done by Andrew Marfleet, aged 13.

noone insult me about writing poems please.


edit (poem added):

OK, after pressure from LOADS of people
[spoiler]Yes, ok. 5 people. and I wasnt exactly pressured either.[/spoiler]
(doesnt rhyme)


here it is.

Moaning and groaning, like a cat. Trapped

Outside

Rusty guns shouting

Never-ending, never finishing like Iyaz's iPod stuck on replay.

I know it will not end, this Hell-Hole I'm stuck in

Not regretting, not even fighting, you cowardly leaders. Just pointing the army and saying Shoot!

God save the Queen? GOD SAVE ME!



Hell, there's the light, I'll reach it soon

And escape my life, the living hell

The presidential Peters! My search has come to an end

End! It's the end of my search! I know the answer:
Dulce Et Decorm est, Pro Patria Mori, the old lie it truly is!


[spoiler]The presidential Peters! IS A FAMILY GUY REFERENCE[/spoiler]

[spoiler]Dulce et Decorum est, Pro Patria Mori, Is "the old lie" It is latin for: it is sweet and fitting to die for ones country.[/spoiler]
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Congratulations. :D That is something to be proud of!
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grats mate

send me a copy
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good job.

i'm quite jealous :lol:
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:shock: nice, congratz mate!
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Re: I got some of my work published :D

hehe, shall post it when I can be bothered to type it up.
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im looking forward to reading
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the only thing I will probably ever publish will be some strange articles and books about chemistry stuff :P
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Pizza hut as a reward :D
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Re: I got some of my work published :D

nice also plz send me a copy

we dnt get pizza hut in SA :(

i miss it tho have fun bro
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Re: I got some of my work published :D

congrats. glad to hear of another person getting a poem published. a teacher entered aboot 5 or so of mine in a contest. all of them would have been published would i have allowed it, but im not a touchy-feely-share your feelings guy, more like a quiet romantic ;)

but congrats regardless, its impressive especially considering your age. post it up so i can read it.
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Congrats man! That's something to be really proud of. Get off your lasy butt and write it up for us to read.
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Congratulations! More man more! Read and write more! :)
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Hi Kaps long time no see and congrats man ill get the lube out and we can have some fun :smt047


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congrads that is special and wonderful

never let any one knock u for expressing your self
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