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Energy Channgling Updated.

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~HellFire

These are strictly tpo's from the ascended server.


Keepin myself busy... >_>

I made this not to mock the admins or anything, just to help them in their quest to make the ascended server look better. These are but mere typo's, some smaller then others, but still easily caught by the eye.

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Realm:

nothing

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Introspection:

*Turn Resource production has an : next to it, non of the other do. Very odd.

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Powerup:

*Energy Attack Skill
This is a measure of your skill at weilding your raw attack power. (Should be "wielding")

*Production Capacity
By concentrating your energy on the physical world, and willing the galaxy to advancements in resource output, you can drive an increase in the overall effectiveness of your realms ability to draw resources from thier labours. (Should be "their")

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Cosmic Development:

*Upholder
(defesive race, occupies 1 planet) (Should be "defensive")

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Planetary Fleets:

*Miniture Black Hole Mines (should be "Miniature")

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The Cosmos:

nothing

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Historic Battles:

nothing

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Histories of Deceipt:

nothing

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Cosmic Trade:

*and its effects absolutely devastating on your enermy (i think there should be an "are" between effects and absolutely)

*play a bit, see what looks important to you, and covert whenever you are ready... (Should be "convert")

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Command Star:

*Enegry Vortex (should be "energy", it's on there twice: once at production and once at details)

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The red messages(when you buy something or do something wrong):

*Energy Channgling Updated. (appeared when I just now bought another level of energy channeling skill)

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Battle log:

(Excursion reports)
*"Defending player name" was was commanding "Command Star name", thier Personal Command Star. (should be "their" and double "was" should go)

*...uses its Black Hole String to inflict 655,951,407 damage, destroying 0 Enegry Vortex Shields on ... (should be "energy", same typo on defending Command Star)

*The fleets of Zorbius subdued the fleets of Zeus, thier petty physical war machines bested on this plane (should be "their", also, no point at end of scentense)

(Incursion reports)
* The fleets of there's nothing here were forced out of ...

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Spy log:

*Defensive Capacity doesn't have a : next to it, all the others do

*Intelligence, Assasination and Production do not have a : next to them

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Descending People:

*thier followers in shame, and thier power dissipate (should be "their")

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That's all I can find for now

Alliance Attack log

forgot the 'a' in Assaults.

Assults on Alliance should be Assaults on Alliances

same with

Assults by Alliance should be Assaults by Alliance

All % Assults by Your Alliance (last 24 Hours)
should be
All % Assaults by Your Alliance (last 24 Hours)

also on the alliance management page

"If your enemy accepts your war challenge, it will be a 'total war' else it will be an 'alliance assult'."
assult needs to be assault.

might want to look at other areas that use the word assault.

Sorry if this has been said already

In main, in private trade broker, when u have 3 trades up

"You have the maximum number of open trades in progress (). You will need these to copmlete before you can accept or instigate further trades."

copmlete ---> complete

Also im not sure if there is meant to be a '3' in between the brackets

On the market page where you generate mpdsd it say at the beginning "use 1 turns....." that im guessing should be turn. since it's only one.

when you take a planet or get a planet taken for example

3180 Unit Production facilites were also desroyed.

just needs to be changed to destroyed

"You do not have the resourcs for such a project"
Should be a second e in resources.
Occurs when you trade on market but dont have enough resources obv.

on ascended still are 4 hours instead of 3 between ascended attacks

Son of sparta[ Earth Confederacy ]



I think it should be "2 officers" instead of "2officers" the good thing is, that he isn't counted as his own officer..

When acquiring 10% bank capacity on the market:

You have acquired additional bank capacity equal to 10 percent of your natural bank size.
It will be visable on your banking area after the next turn change.

Should be visible.

In the User guide on main server it says "Super Attack Troops" twice, it should say "Super Defence Troops" the second time. Also, if someone who is better at grammar then I could clarify if it should be Defense or Defence in all of the many places it is spelled the second way buy should be the first.

You have the maximum number of open trades in progress (). You will need these to copmlete before you can accept or instigate further trades.

Pergatory in realm shift is misspelled: It is correctly spelled purgatory. Sorry if this is intentional.

on the command center for asgards beside AntiCovert Technology:Mind-Computer Disintigration

should be disintegration