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I do believe monsterous is not a word.

turkey_man wrote:I do believe monsterous is not a word.

It is actually monstrous.

So yes it is a word, just spelling error.

Not really a big deal, just a little annoyance:

mind bloweringSize: mind blowering (max defences: 1,000,000,000)

Looking at a planet of maximum size

It's like blowing the leave away with your mind

in the houses update for beta (soon to be main)
"disciples" is spelt incorrectly
there's no 'c' for some reason in-game

Not sure admin reads this (or cares for that matter) but in the military records it says

"Super Soldier Lost"
"Assassin Lost"
"Defence Mercs Killed"
"Attack Mercs Killed"

The rest are plural so it should be fixed if he checks it.

Sorry if it's already been mentioned, if it has this post can be deleted.

on www.gatewars.com

reads:
"Come experience the GateWars realm, community, grief and victories! You will never look at your keyboard the same again...."

should say

"Come experience the GateWars realm, community, grief and victories! You will never look at your keyboard the same way again....

Another spelling mistake, when making a planet it says

"The outcome is always a suprise"

Should be surprise.

for taking a planet in BETA

It was confirmed that The defences of the planet held up under attack!
xxxxx defence facilities, though, in the course of the battle.

obviously no capital "T" for the
and what happened to the defence facilities??? it doesnt say, though they were destroyed (obviously)

Another typo when looking at officers logs.

174 attacks total | page 6of 6

Mobile Assult Planet should that not be mobile assault planet?

Where officers are it says "1officers total | page 1 of 1"

typo in splanations, specifically the UP one:

We multiply this by half your officer income percent, or x 0, giving total officer contribution of 500

well generally when x by 0 it will equal nothing. Most likely a bug, thats when its on 30% for officers btw.

I suppose there are far too many grammatical mistakes into the game for all of them to be corrected, but I shall help by stating all those I have noticed, from the perspective of an ascended replicator-type society.

Realm alert levels are illogical.
There are no such terms as "higherest" and "higherester".
Although the comic nature of the terms is appreciated, the terms should be :
Low, Medium, High, and Highest.

There are several capital letter missing words. To better explain it, words that start with a normal letter, instead of a Capital letter, as the starting word of a sentence, or single word describing an asset.

[spoiler=Attack Log spelling mistakes.]As with all battles, this one has been recorded for the official history of your realm. You, of course, are the first to know the results as they are reported directly to you first. This is the official report of the battle:


The army of X stormed the realm of Y!

X sent:
2,236,629 Covert Infiltrator Bot and Off Topic:
Instead of this, a comma should be used, as there is another "and". 1,935,081 Super Assimilators and 0 Assimilators

Careful and thourough Off Topic:
- throughout/ thorough - term unknown to me, but there is no such word as "thourough" observation records show Off Topic:
- missing word that the troops were armed as follows:

13,664 Nano-AI Cruiser Squadran Off Topic:
- Squadron/s deploy from and encircle the mothership, adding to its offensive capacities!
1,367,776 Super Assimilators have Mobile Assult Off Topic:
- assault PlanetOff Topic:
(s)
567305 Super Assimilators came unarmed!


Opposite this, stood the forces of Y

Y resisted the aggressors with:
79 Defense Clone and 39 Defense Drone
Careful and thourough Off Topic:
- again observation records show Off Topic:
- missing word that the army carried the following arsenal:

0 Defense Clone have what it takes... Off Topic:
- 0 denotes the use of multiple object ending, such as "Defense Clones".
79 Defense Clone came unarmed!
39 Defense Drone came unarmed!


In a fury, the two opposing forces clash!

X, personally commanding XSHIP, their MotherShip, initiates the battle.
Y was commanding YSHIP , thier Off Topic:
- THEIR MotherShip.
XSHIP hovers above the battle, with all available fleets launching!
YSHIP , and its fleets, meets it head on! Off Topic:
- Error. Multiple objects meet multiple objects. YSHIP and its fleets MEET it/them head on!
XSHIP uses it's Nano Volley to inflict 46,465,888,000 damage, destroying 0 Energy Shields on YSHIP !
Blowing through the extended shield defenses, it also destroyed 0 Energy Volley, and totally destroyed 0 fleets!
X's XSHIP adds 46,333,038,000 additional attack onto their ground troops!

YSHIP uses it's Energy Volley to inflict 20,040,000 damage, destroying 0 Matter-Phasic Shields on Destiny II!

The Mothership has exhausted all of its offensive power. Off Topic:
- Which one? Both. The Motherships have exhausted all of their offensive power.

The forces of X rush in full force, and inflict 450,458,181,153 damage on Y's forces!
It was confirmed that 0 of Y's forces fell at the hands of X's assult. Off Topic:
- assault


The forces of Y fought back with all they could, and managed to inflict 3 damage on X's forces!
They managed to eradicate 0 of X's troops.


The forces of X's Covert Infiltrator Bot break off from main attack force, and seek out Y's Undercover Agents! Off Topic:
- Doesn't really make sense. The forces of <x>'s <units>? Why not just say, X's <units>? Would make more sense.
0 Covert Infiltrator Bot(s) Off Topic:
- 0 botS are taken down by the defending army while attempting to disengage from the main battle!
The remaining Covert Infiltrator BotS engage the covert networks of the realm.
Always keep in mind, though, that a weaker army than the opponent's, will distract their efforts, decreasing their effectiveness...
With no enemy army to speak of, the main assult Off Topic:
- again force assists in the hunt for covert networks! They add 87 percent to the existing power of the Covert Infiltrator Bots!
The Covert Infiltrator Bots outspied, outintelled, outwitted and overall overpowered the defending Undercover Agents at their own game!
With 331,737,784,776 power remaining, they manage to eliminate 9 of Y's Undercover Agents!

The damage done by the Covert Infiltrator Bots was directly influenced by their covert killing capacity, and the covert capacity of the defending Undercover Agents
The damage to the Covert Infiltrator Bots was directly influenced by the defending military power, and the strength of the Covert Infiltrator Bots



Putting down the chronicled battle report, you cross reference and call for the corrosponding Off Topic:
- corresponding military armory reports to see the state of your weapons after such a battle...

Your Nano-AI Cruiser Squadran Off Topic:
- Squadron went from strength 111,700 to 110,650 (now 110650/115600 and 4 percent damaged)
Your Mobile Assult Off Topic:
- againPlanets went from strength 5,540 to 5,480 (now 5480/5760 and 5 percent damaged)



The forces of X devastated those of Y
The forces of Y flee from the battlefield! One could see glory on the face of the victors, and spite on the defeated!

Considering what was available at the time in the realm of Y, it is recorded that
a total of 13,417,218,344 Naquadah was taken from the realm of Y

Many wonder if Y will consider retaliation, but - when force meets force - there will have to be some changes in the preparedness of Y before such a feat should wisely be considered![/spoiler]

As a last addition, I will to ask, what of the capital-written ascension paths?
What is the reason of <x> of the ABCD instead of a simple <x> of the Abcd?
It's hurtful to the eyes.

just so i wont open new topic:

Turcu
[ The Magnificents - SefSuprem]
Disciples of Ptah (Time)
God of a DESCENDED Ancient Gods of a DESCENDED AJNA