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Have you Ever????

Posted: Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:28 pm
by Rudy Peña
This is just something, I wrote right now and thought I share this, casue who knows maybe some of you Ladies and Gentlemen feel the same way or used too or can relate to this in some way.

I hope you guys and girls like it.

Please enjoy!!!


[spoiler]Have you ever loved someone that is hurts you so much???
Have you ever been in love so much that you can’t stop thinking about them, no matter what you do???
Have you ever loved someone so much that whatever you do, just reminds you of them???
Have you ever loved someone that you just want to hold them in your arms tightly and never let them let go???
Have you ever been in love that even though you are on the other side of the world, you feel like they are right next to you when you talk over the phone or over IM???
Have you ever loved someone so much that you just want to make love to them just to show them how much you love them, cause no matter how many times you say “I love you”, you can never convey all of your love to them???
Have you ever loved someone no matter what they say or do, you just want to kiss them while hugging them very passionately???
Have you ever wanted to hold them in your arms all day and night, cause you never want to let them go, while listening to classical music in the background???
Have you ever loved someone, that no matter how bad your day was, just hearing their voice makes whatever made your day bad just vanish???
Have you ever loved someone, that whenever you talk to them that it seems that nothing else matters in the world???
Have you ever loved someone, you just want nothing else, but to just be with them???
Have you ever loved someone that no matter how tired you are, you stay awake to talk to your soulmate, no matter in how many hours to have to go to work again or wake up???
Have you ever loved someone your love for them grows stronger with each passing moment???[/spoiler]

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 4:29 pm
by MEZZANINE
You soppy git :lol:

Well yes, I'd hope everyone has at least once........................ but most of us sober up :lol: :lol: :lol:

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 5:55 pm
by ƒëmmë ƒatalë
you havent lived until you have... you haven't died until you've been through the breakup of one either.

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:06 pm
by buck
Without love, there is no Pain, And without pain, there cannot be humanity.

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:15 pm
by ƒëmmë ƒatalë
buck wrote:Without love, there is no Pain, And without pain, there cannot be humanity.


had enough humanity this year to last me a lifetime :(

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:25 pm
by harchester
i wrote this for my 6th year advanced higher English (school year) it got an a :-D

[spoiler]100 Days of Love

Message: Peter and Tina are sitting in the park doing nothing, but just gazing into the sky, while all their friends are having fun with their beloved half.
Tina: I'm so bored. Just wish I have a boyfriend now to spend time with.
Peter: I guess we're the only leftovers. We're the only person who isn't with a date now.
(both sigh n silence for a while)
Tina: I think I have a good idea. Lets play a game
Peter: Eh? What game?
Tina: Eem..It's quite simple. You be my boyfriend for 100 days and I'll be your girlfriend for 100 days. what do you think?
Peter: Oookay..Anyway I don't have any plan for the next few months.
Tina: You sound like you aren't looking forward to it at all. Cheer up. Today will be our first day and our first date. Where should we go?
Peter: What about a movie? I heard that there is a really great movie in theater now.
Tina: Seems like I don't have any better idea than this. Lets move. (went to watch their movies and sent each other home)

Day 2:
Peter and Tina went to a concert together, and Peter bought Tina a keychain with a star.

Day 3:
They went shopping together for a friend's birthday present. Share an ice-cream together and hugged each other for the first time.

Day 7:

Peter drove Tina up onto a mountain and they watch the sunset together. When the night came and the moon glowed, they said sat on the grass gazing at the stars together. A meteor passed by. Tina mumbled something.

Day 25:
Spend time at a themepark and got onto rollercoasters, and ate hotdogs and cotton candy. Peter and Tina got in the haunted house and Tina grabbed someone's hand instead of Peter's hand by accident. They laughed together
for a while.

Day 67:
They drove pass a circus and decided to get in to watch the show. The midget asked Tina to play a part as his assistant in the magic show. Went around to see other entertainments around after the show. Came to a fortune teller and she just said "Treasure every moment from now on" and a tear rolled down the fortune teller's cheek.

Day 84:
Tina suggested that they go to the beach. The beach wasn't so crowded that day. They have their first kiss with each other just as the sun is setting.

Day 99:
They decided to have a simple day and is deciding to have a walk around the city. They sits down onto a bench.

1:23 pm
Tina: I'm thirsty. Lets rest for a while first.
Peter: Wait here while I go buy some drinks. What would you like?
Tina: Eem...Apple juice will be just fine.


1:43 pm
Tina waiting for about 20 minutes and Peter havent return. Then someone walked up to her.
Stranger: Is your name Tina?
Tina: Yes, and may I help you?
Stranger: Just now down there on the street a drunk driver has crashed into a guy. I think its your friend.
Tina ran over to the spot with the stranger and sees Peter lying on the floor with blood over his face and her apple juice still in his hands. The ambulance came and she went to the hospital with Peter. Tina sat outside the emergency room for five and a half hours. The doctor came out, and he sigh.

11:51 pm
Doctor: I'm sorry, but we did the best we could. He is still breathing now but God would take him away from us very soon. We found this letter inside his pocket.

The doctor hands over the letter to Tina and she goes into the room to see Peter. He look weak but peaceful. Tina read the letter and then she burst into tears. Here is what the letter said.

Tina,
Our 100 days is almost over. I had fun with you during all these days. Although you may be greedy sometimes and less thoughtful, but these all brought happiness into my life. I have realize that you are a really cute girl and blamed myself for never taken the time to knowing that. I have nothing much to ask for, but I just wish that we can extend the day. I want to be your boyfriend forever and wish that you can be beside me all the time. Tina, I love you.

11:58
Tina: (sobbing) Peter. Did you know what was the wish I made on the night there was a meteor. I asked God to let us last forever. We were suppose to last 100 days so Peter! You can't leave me! I LOVE YOU, but can you come back to
me now? I love you Peter. I LOVE YOU.

As the clock struck twelve, Peter's heart stopped beating. It was 100 days.[/spoiler]

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:03 am
by Rudy Peña
MEZZANINE wrote:You soppy git :lol:

Well yes, I'd hope everyone has at least once........................ but most of us sober up :lol: :lol: :lol:

I guess so........

temptress wrote:you havent lived until you have... you haven't died until you've been through the breakup of one either.
I hope this never comes true for me, cause my love my girlfriend to death and I would/will do anything for her. She loves me to death too and she would/will do anything for me. We love each other so much, that we cant hurt each other, cause we will be hurting ourselves.

harchester wrote:i wrote this for my 6th year advanced higher English (school year) it got an a :-D

[spoiler]100 Days of Love

Message: Peter and Tina are sitting in the park doing nothing, but just gazing into the sky, while all their friends are having fun with their beloved half.
Tina: I'm so bored. Just wish I have a boyfriend now to spend time with.
Peter: I guess we're the only leftovers. We're the only person who isn't with a date now.
(both sigh n silence for a while)
Tina: I think I have a good idea. Lets play a game
Peter: Eh? What game?
Tina: Eem..It's quite simple. You be my boyfriend for 100 days and I'll be your girlfriend for 100 days. what do you think?
Peter: Oookay..Anyway I don't have any plan for the next few months.
Tina: You sound like you aren't looking forward to it at all. Cheer up. Today will be our first day and our first date. Where should we go?
Peter: What about a movie? I heard that there is a really great movie in theater now.
Tina: Seems like I don't have any better idea than this. Lets move. (went to watch their movies and sent each other home)

Day 2:
Peter and Tina went to a concert together, and Peter bought Tina a keychain with a star.

Day 3:
They went shopping together for a friend's birthday present. Share an ice-cream together and hugged each other for the first time.

Day 7:

Peter drove Tina up onto a mountain and they watch the sunset together. When the night came and the moon glowed, they said sat on the grass gazing at the stars together. A meteor passed by. Tina mumbled something.

Day 25:
Spend time at a themepark and got onto rollercoasters, and ate hotdogs and cotton candy. Peter and Tina got in the haunted house and Tina grabbed someone's hand instead of Peter's hand by accident. They laughed together
for a while.

Day 67:
They drove pass a circus and decided to get in to watch the show. The midget asked Tina to play a part as his assistant in the magic show. Went around to see other entertainments around after the show. Came to a fortune teller and she just said "Treasure every moment from now on" and a tear rolled down the fortune teller's cheek.

Day 84:
Tina suggested that they go to the beach. The beach wasn't so crowded that day. They have their first kiss with each other just as the sun is setting.

Day 99:
They decided to have a simple day and is deciding to have a walk around the city. They sits down onto a bench.

1:23 pm
Tina: I'm thirsty. Lets rest for a while first.
Peter: Wait here while I go buy some drinks. What would you like?
Tina: Eem...Apple juice will be just fine.


1:43 pm
Tina waiting for about 20 minutes and Peter havent return. Then someone walked up to her.
Stranger: Is your name Tina?
Tina: Yes, and may I help you?
Stranger: Just now down there on the street a drunk driver has crashed into a guy. I think its your friend.
Tina ran over to the spot with the stranger and sees Peter lying on the floor with blood over his face and her apple juice still in his hands. The ambulance came and she went to the hospital with Peter. Tina sat outside the emergency room for five and a half hours. The doctor came out, and he sigh.

11:51 pm
Doctor: I'm sorry, but we did the best we could. He is still breathing now but God would take him away from us very soon. We found this letter inside his pocket.

The doctor hands over the letter to Tina and she goes into the room to see Peter. He look weak but peaceful. Tina read the letter and then she burst into tears. Here is what the letter said.

Tina,
Our 100 days is almost over. I had fun with you during all these days. Although you may be greedy sometimes and less thoughtful, but these all brought happiness into my life. I have realize that you are a really cute girl and blamed myself for never taken the time to knowing that. I have nothing much to ask for, but I just wish that we can extend the day. I want to be your boyfriend forever and wish that you can be beside me all the time. Tina, I love you.

11:58
Tina: (sobbing) Peter. Did you know what was the wish I made on the night there was a meteor. I asked God to let us last forever. We were suppose to last 100 days so Peter! You can't leave me! I LOVE YOU, but can you come back to
me now? I love you Peter. I LOVE YOU.

As the clock struck twelve, Peter's heart stopped beating. It was 100 days.[/spoiler]
OMG THat is so so very sad, I almost cried.

Do you mind if I can use this in the future??

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:16 am
by ƒëmmë ƒatalë
Rudy Pena wrote:
temptress wrote:you havent lived until you have... you haven't died until you've been through the breakup of one either.
I hope this never comes true for me, cause my love my girlfriend to death and I would/will do anything for her. She loves me to death too and she would/will do anything for me. We love each other so much, that we cant hurt each other, cause we will be hurting ourselves.


meh I thought so too at the time.. and I would have rather hurt myself then ever hurt anyone I love.

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:19 am
by xXxsephirothxXx
Man harch that really cut me up.... like that's just sad almost cried.. :cry:

I would do anything for my girlfriend... she means the world to me... i have pretty much felt this way since we were really young kids! (havent been "bf/gf" the whole time but yeah) I wouldn't know what to do if that story were replaced with me and her and she died... I die a little just seeing her sad :(

Re: Have you Ever????

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:23 am
by Rudy Peña
temptress wrote:
Rudy Pena wrote:
temptress wrote:you havent lived until you have... you haven't died until you've been through the breakup of one either.
I hope this never comes true for me, cause my love my girlfriend to death and I would/will do anything for her. She loves me to death too and she would/will do anything for me. We love each other so much, that we cant hurt each other, cause we will be hurting ourselves.


meh I thought so too at the time.. and I would have rather hurt myself then ever hurt anyone I love.
I see, But this is different with me and my girlfriend, cause I know this is all apart God's plan.