Ascension typo's
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 7:30 am
Keepin myself busy... >_>
I made this not to mock the admins or anything, just to help them in their quest to make the ascended server look better. These are but mere typo's, some smaller then others, but still easily caught by the eye.
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Realm:
nothing
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Introspection:
*Turn Resource production has an : next to it, non of the other do. Very odd.
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Powerup:
*Energy Attack Skill
This is a measure of your skill at weilding your raw attack power. (Should be "wielding")
*Production Capacity
By concentrating your energy on the physical world, and willing the galaxy to advancements in resource output, you can drive an increase in the overall effectiveness of your realms ability to draw resources from thier labours. (Should be "their")
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Cosmic Development:
*Upholder
(defesive race, occupies 1 planet) (Should be "defensive")
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Planetary Fleets:
*Miniture Black Hole Mines (should be "Miniature")
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The Cosmos:
nothing
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Historic Battles:
nothing
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Histories of Deceipt:
nothing
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Cosmic Trade:
*and its effects absolutely devastating on your enermy (i think there should be an "are" between effects and absolutely)
*play a bit, see what looks important to you, and covert whenever you are ready... (Should be "convert")
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Command Star:
*Enegry Vortex (should be "energy", it's on there twice: once at production and once at details)
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The red messages(when you buy something or do something wrong):
*Energy Channgling Updated. (appeared when I just now bought another level of energy channeling skill)
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Battle log:
(Excursion reports)
*"Defending player name" was was commanding "Command Star name", thier Personal Command Star. (should be "their" and double "was" should go)
*...uses its Black Hole String to inflict 655,951,407 damage, destroying 0 Enegry Vortex Shields on ... (should be "energy", same typo on defending Command Star)
*The fleets of Zorbius subdued the fleets of Zeus, thier petty physical war machines bested on this plane (should be "their", also, no point at end of scentense)
(Incursion reports)
* The fleets of there's nothing here were forced out of ...
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Spy log:
*Defensive Capacity doesn't have a : next to it, all the others do
*Intelligence, Assasination and Production do not have a : next to them
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Descending People:
*thier followers in shame, and thier power dissipate (should be "their")
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That's all I can find for now
I made this not to mock the admins or anything, just to help them in their quest to make the ascended server look better. These are but mere typo's, some smaller then others, but still easily caught by the eye.
----------
Realm:
nothing
----------
Introspection:
*Turn Resource production has an : next to it, non of the other do. Very odd.
----------
Powerup:
*Energy Attack Skill
This is a measure of your skill at weilding your raw attack power. (Should be "wielding")
*Production Capacity
By concentrating your energy on the physical world, and willing the galaxy to advancements in resource output, you can drive an increase in the overall effectiveness of your realms ability to draw resources from thier labours. (Should be "their")
----------
Cosmic Development:
*Upholder
(defesive race, occupies 1 planet) (Should be "defensive")
----------
Planetary Fleets:
*Miniture Black Hole Mines (should be "Miniature")
----------
The Cosmos:
nothing
----------
Historic Battles:
nothing
----------
Histories of Deceipt:
nothing
----------
Cosmic Trade:
*and its effects absolutely devastating on your enermy (i think there should be an "are" between effects and absolutely)
*play a bit, see what looks important to you, and covert whenever you are ready... (Should be "convert")
----------
Command Star:
*Enegry Vortex (should be "energy", it's on there twice: once at production and once at details)
----------
The red messages(when you buy something or do something wrong):
*Energy Channgling Updated. (appeared when I just now bought another level of energy channeling skill)
----------
Battle log:
(Excursion reports)
*"Defending player name" was was commanding "Command Star name", thier Personal Command Star. (should be "their" and double "was" should go)
*...uses its Black Hole String to inflict 655,951,407 damage, destroying 0 Enegry Vortex Shields on ... (should be "energy", same typo on defending Command Star)
*The fleets of Zorbius subdued the fleets of Zeus, thier petty physical war machines bested on this plane (should be "their", also, no point at end of scentense)
(Incursion reports)
* The fleets of there's nothing here were forced out of ...
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Spy log:
*Defensive Capacity doesn't have a : next to it, all the others do
*Intelligence, Assasination and Production do not have a : next to them
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Descending People:
*thier followers in shame, and thier power dissipate (should be "their")
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That's all I can find for now
