alpha story

[little chaka]

long long ago in a galexy far far away, the empire of omega stood alone, just a single alliance......................... then a wonderfull light shone above ETL's head. "WE WILL START A TRAINING ALLAINCE" shouted the powerfull ETL.
it was set. the alpha allegiance to be run by gate. ghostface and tiny were accepted in along with many other following.
it was the begining of the alpha allegiance.
the players worked together. some staying longer then others, great leaders came and went along with great players. many players were lost at battle, some left for reasons unknown. some such as biuk and masterP vanished into thin air and were never heard from again.

one day a light shined above the alpha and omega empire, many alphans dissapeared as new ones took their place. then a cookie rose above them all, and the bowed to the cookie as it promised to protect them. tiny and salem went to the cookie and touched it, it then flew into hundreds of cookies for everyone to eat and they did.


then tiny came out with pb and j beer to wash it down.

arcturus fell to the ground and died only to be revieved by su.

stu and zak had a wonderfull wedding when they noticed their true feelings for one another. and adopted grizzly and all the other alphans.

magius turned into the pet dog while for some odd reason blackburn became a pet gold fish.

many wondered still if deleted ancient was in fact deleted, turns out he wasnt and he started dating ra. ra then got mad at him and broke up with him later to date danielv. some thought brothers coudlt date, but since they were adopted they found it fine. but they then broke up when they noticed that only gay guys date other guys.

ghostface came to be a strong man, a powerfull man, and eventually went nuts and ran away. he then came back and decided to take over the cookie kingdom from a evil wizzard, ha shak ash rak who commanded vast armies of human form replicators.

ghostface then gave the kingdom back to tiny.

don lewis was a very interesting man, he came to owning his own horse ranch until he was drunk one day and let the horses free. now hes poor and is living in bazsy's attic.

bazsy is a rich man who found don lewis on the street and took him in. bazsy then went on to win the lottery for the 20th time in a row.

thicks, prior, and agewen were triplets. usually know as the three stoodges, unfortunatly during a scuffle between the 3 the 4th stoodge shep was shot and killed. they later went nuts and robbed a bank, theyre all in jail now.

this is when ra started dating danielv, they were a nice couple. but once again they broke up cuz THEY noticed only gay guys date guys. they then started dating the olsen twins.

danielv then dissapeared for two years with mary-kate then came back.

gatedialer was a quiet man until he met ra. they were best friends until gate chopped ra's head off and went to jail. luckily they were able to put ra's head back on.


zecho ralho and lunatic were twins, they lived a nice life. but they went on drugs. not real drugs candy drugs. tiny told them they were actually real. and they fealt high and were driving and drove off a cliff. tiny was then grounded for 5 years by stu and zak, and zecho ralho and lunatic made a nice recovery.


stu and zak divorced many times, but they never stayed divorced cuz they knew it was best for their children if they were together.

nephite101, krazy bomb and leena were triplets. the were very close until they had a big blowout and all ran away to come back 6 years laters with tatoos all over them singing i wanna be sedated.


ghostian and buzzard were twins. they hated each other though. they shared a room and almost pushed eachother out the window a few times. but over the years they learned to get along when tiny said for every year they got along they each got a cookie.


Zhar Eros, Vrix, and Dr. Alek were all almost the same age, zhar being the youngest. they were mean to zhar sometimes but usually got along. eros once tried to throw him off a cliff, vrix tried getting rid of him by him by throwing him off the fishing boat on the anuall alpha family fishing trip, only to be pushed off himself by zhar. and Dr. Alek convinced zhar he wasnt loved and he ran away till the cops found him to blocks away. man was Dr. Alek grounded for that one.


flavor and arashi were twins, arashi being a minute older. he allways held that against flavor when it came to anything. like who got the last brownie, or cookie. or who got to use tiny for moving target practice and who got to use zhar. but they did have theyre fun times like when they tried to throw deleted ancient to the bears at the zoo. deleted ancient didnt get along with them much, he mostly got along with huxley and tallon.


huxley, tallon, and deleted ancient were dare devils. theyd run away, sneak out of the house to meet girls, and sometimes even steal candy bars. they were grounded a lot, but they were allways funny people and fun to have around. theyre now grounded till theyre 78 for sneaking out of the house to go to a college party.


rich was a handsom guy, he allways was on dates, he wasnt home much but he was a fun guy. but he then had a mental break down when zak walked in and said "rich i am your father"


DarkDayz and Renegáde were best freinds. they got along the most out of the whole family. they did EVERYTHING together. they got into trouble together. they were fun to watch cuz they did jack ass stunts. they must have been brought to the emergancy room 20 times a piece at the minimum. but the sunglasses or darkdayz never fell off showing his true power over the dark side of the force.


high archon was a good guy but he allways got in trouble. he was allways doing and saying stupid things to get him in trouble with zak and stu. but he was fun to talk to and helped people when he wasnt grounded. his final stunt has him grounded for years as stu proclaimed "3 year olds cant have beers."


Dan_crossy was in the circus. he was a clown. tiny was afraid of him cuz shes afraid of clowns and was the only one who wouldnt hang out with him when he had his clown costume or make-up on. he know stars in the horror movies Mr. Jingles and It.


after trying to take care of all the kids stu freaked and got a divorce again, she had a sex change and is now a he. but then he changed back to a she and got remarried to zak. she now is happy with zak and knows her being a woman and being married is best for the kids. her first words to the kids everyday are "AUTOBOTS ROLL OUT!!!"


following arcturus had a sex change cuz he allways wanted to be a big sister


now they all live happily ever after in one gynormous house on the coast of california............haryy potter's scar tingled to life once again.












props to my bro eric (ha shak ash rak) for the movie quotes


i wrote this quite a while back. give me feedback.

[Apadamek]

Hokay! This topics got a new beginning, and by god it had better be a half decent one. i'm sorry for deleting some posts that were meant well etc but i had too because this thread needed it. NOW; if you don't like the story, tell the author she is asking for criticism. But if your going to be a prick about it just don't bother posting. Now can we all just get along, cheesus.

[semper]

blah You need to re-think the approach and write it again, in a more appealing tone and attention grabbing way to stop reader from forcing themself to go on (though i dont know who would do that..) Writers like to show the reader whats going on not tell them. I will let you work that bit out yourself.

You wanted feedback. There ya go.
pointless.

[little chaka]

blah You need to re-think the approach and write it again, in a more appealing tone and attention grabbing way to stop reader from forcing themself to go on (though i dont know who would do that..) Writers like to show the reader whats going on not tell them. I will let you work that bit out yourself.

You wanted feedback. There ya go.
pointless.

im not trying to write a grammer perfect essay.


it was a joke and u dont understand that.

[Solus]

here we go again...